Friday, 13 March 2020

My camp experience

at camp there was a lot of friend groups around. 
this is what i did 
 
As I went on my journey to living springs with my FRIENDS.
Camp is when you go in a tent or cabin, and you have a holiday.i went with ALL of the year 6s to get a nice time away from our siblings. We sleep in tents
My best part was all the cake,pool,and sleep. I loved the cake that we got for hollys birthday cake.

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  1. Anonymous20 March 2020 at 12:24

    Kia Ora sapphire,
    My name is Emily, from New Brighton Catholic School I really loved your story about living springs,I loved how you made the word friends rainbow, it really drew me in.
    You reminded me of when we went to Living Springs camp and how we had so much fun It was quite the experience!
    Next time maybe you could add a DLO and have a question, it might help to look at the six steps to a quality blog post even though you have done well with them.
    How long did this take for you to write? What size is your writing? because your sizing is cool.

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    1. Anonymous25 March 2020 at 12:35

      Hi ems thanks for the comment

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