Thursday, 7 May 2020

The little Shoemaker

W.A.L.T Describe a character that we learned about in a multimodal text.
The little Shoemaker
The little shoemaker is a little man that sells shoes. He's got 2 kids and a wife.This shop means a lot to him because it's a family  owned business.  He can be very shy but when u get to know him he has a great personality and is great to have a round as a friend.    
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  1. Mrs Judkins8 May 2020 at 10:34

    Great description Sapphire. He sounds like a really nice guy. I love how you have thought about what type of friend he would be, it gives him a lot more personality. Just remember in your writing not to use text abbreviations and actually write the correct word (e.g you not u). What made you choose the Little Shoemaker to write about?

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