WALT: wright 300 word story
this is what I did it was very fun to do and it is not true!
I saw a diving board very high up. I was very scared but then I got the courage to line up. The line went very fast, next thing I know I'm at the front.
I climb up and look DOWN and I am thinking, well I think I change my mind. I go to climb down and someone is coming up. I knew I had to jump. ‘Here goes nothing, “AHHHHHHH!”’ I scream jumping in the water, down, down, down I fall, it takes forever (but really 5 seconds) to get down then, “SLAP!” I hit the water “owe , ouch, that must have hurt.”
I realised I hit the water so hard I've got a bleeding nose and lip and I can’t move. I think I broke my leg. People came diving in to help me, life rings thrown at me, medics coming to help me but all I do is stay there in pain yelling and screaming for help. I need to get to the side I push and pull my arms to the side to try to get to the side. Then I froze and was out of the pool, faces staring at me. When I look to the side to see Claudia she is standing there helping me up. I found out that I just really hurt it so after 20 minutes me and Claudia went on the hydro slides.
Then I see Charlee. She is with her friends walking to the diving board. I'm thinking OMG plz don’t go to the big one then she goes on the small one that is still high but well she jumps into the 3 meter deep pool with no slaps or wacks just feet first. Then I go in the line and I'm the first person.
I walk up and I’m standing at the end so I jump and i'm in the water kicking and splashing then I’m fine I'm in the water and i'm fine I swim to the edge she is there say good job you where feet first you did great the we go on the big one she told me to go feet first so I tried and well I DID IT eek I did it and every one was happy because I did it yay. THE END
Have you ever been to Jellie park?
what did you do?
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