Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 30 August 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Sapphire, thanks for sharing your learning with us.
ReplyDeleteI hope that you enjoyed learning about this weather event. Did you see that there has been a storm overnight in Auckland that has caused a lot of flooding and destruction. Thankfully noone has been hurt.
Next time you could swap the sizes of your informtaion around and have the detail in bigger font and your question smaller.
Thanks Sapphire :-)
Kia ora Sapphire,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing a few facts about what you have learnt. Tropical cyclones are scary natural events but are also incredible at the same time.
I agree with Mrs S, think about the different font sizes. Could you add an image next time? This will give your readers an image to capture their attention.
I know that Tropical Cyclones are not man made and that they can cause a lot of destruction.