Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 21 May 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Sapphire, my name is Jennifer and I am a student from NBC.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post. It told me a bit of what pentecost is and how you added colour to it.
Maybe next time you could check your spelling and capital letters.
What was your inspiration for the pastel rainbow background?
Hello Jennifer, Thank you for your advice I will be sure to use it next time i'm making a blog. I'm glad it told you a little bit about Pentecost. My inspiration for the pastel background was just so that it would make it colourful.
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