Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 21 May 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Sapphire, my name is Molly and I am a student at NBC.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added images and different fonts. This reminds me of a slideshow I posted a long time ago.
Maybe next time you could add more punctuation.Whats your favourite part about your blog? How long did this blog take you?
Hi Sapphire, My name is Anya from NBC school.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you showed what a personification is and the background ideas.
The examples are really good I like the example that you used. You have everything you need.
How did you get the backgrounds?
Hola Sapphire,My name is Elliott from N.B.C.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog post on personification. My favourite part was the example.
This taught me a lot about personification. Next time maybe you could make your slides less busy?
Why did you use so many rainbows?
Thanks, Elliott